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Please use one of the strings below to post your DYK nomination, using the "author" and "nominator" fields to identify the users who should receive credit for their contributions if the hook is featured on the main page.
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{{subst:NewDYKnom
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Candidate entries
Articles created/expanded on September 5
Amankila
- ... that the design of Amankila, a coastal Balinese hotel, was inspired by the palaces of Ujung and Tirtagangga? Created by Rosiestep (talk), Dr. Blofeld (talk). Nominated by Rosiestep (talk) at 17:40, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
Clyde Refinery
- ... that the Clyde Refinery located in Clyde, New South Wales is Australia's oldest refinery? Created by Bine Mai (talk). Self nom at 17:35, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
1983–84 Michigan Wolverines men's basketball team
- ... that 1983–84 Michigan Wolverines men's basketball team won the 1984 National Invitation Tournament? 5x expanded by TonyTheTiger (talk). Nominated by TonyTheTiger (talk) at 17:23, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
Paper clothing
- ... that paper clothing was briefly very popular in the 1960s? Created by Sandstein (talk). Nominated by Sandstein (talk) at 17:16, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
William Piers (constable)
- ... that in 1574, Walter Devereux, 1st Earl of Essex arrested William Piers and attempted to have him detained in Carrickfergus Castle? Created by Dr. Blofeld (talk), Rosiestep (talk). Nominated by Dr. Blofeld (talk) at 17:12, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
1980–81 Michigan Wolverines men's basketball team
- ... that Mike McGee set numerous Big Ten Conference records for the 1980–81 Michigan Wolverines men's basketball team who hold the current Big Ten record for most overtime games in a season? Created by TonyTheTiger (talk). Nominated by TonyTheTiger (talk) at 15:16, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
1979–80 Michigan Wolverines men's basketball team
- ... that the 1979–80 Michigan Wolverines men's basketball team qualified for the 1980 National Invitation Tournament even though they were unranked in the AP Poll all season? Created by TonyTheTiger (talk). Nominated by TonyTheTiger (talk) at 15:16, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
SMS Braunschweig
- ... that the German battleship SMS Braunschweig (pictured) engaged the Russian battleship Slava during the Battle of the Gulf of Riga during World War I? 5x expanded by Parsecboy (talk). Self nom at 15:05, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
Amanjiwo
- ... that the Amanjiwo hotel in Central Java, Indonesia is built from local limestone? Created by Dr. Blofeld (talk). Nominated by Dr. Blofeld (talk) at 13:48, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
List of music concerts at the Millennium Stadium
- ... that for music concerts held at the Millennium Stadium, 12 drapes can reduce the maximum size of an audience down to between 12,000 and 46,000? Created by Seth Whales (talk). Self nom at 11:26, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
Adolf Heyrowsky
- ... that flying ace Hauptmann Adolf Heyrowsky (pictured) died in 1945, on the brink of promotion to Generalmajor? 5x expanded by Fridae'sDoom (talk). Self nom at 10:42, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
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- x5 expension? It looks very similar to the version of it in May this year? Can you explain? It must be x5 expension in pure text (ie pics, titles, quotes, refs etc don't count) Victuallers (talk) 16:36, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
Dabar Bridge
- ... that 354 metres (1,161 ft) long and 60 metres (200 ft) tall Dabar Bridge carries the Croatian A1 motorway across a flash flood gully rather than a permanent watercourse? Created by Tomobe03 (talk). Self nom at 10:32, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
Hungarian Crown
- ... that the so-called Hungarian Crown (pictured), part of the Polish Crown Jewels, was modelled after the Holy Crown of Hungary? Created by BurgererSF (talk) 10:19, 5 September 2010 (UTC). Nominated by BurgererSF (talk) 10:19, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
Stephen Lekapenos and Constantine Lekapenos
- ... that the brothers Stephen and Constantine Lekapenos overthrew their father, the Byzantine emperor Romanos I Lekapenos, only to be themselves removed from power by Constantine VII after a few weeks? Created by Dimadick (talk). Nominated by Cplakidas (talk) at 07:46, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
1976–77 Michigan Wolverines men's basketball team
- ... that 1976–77 Michigan Wolverines men's basketball team reached the Regional finals of the 1977 NCAA Men's Division I Basketball Tournament on the stregth of a record-setting rebounding performance by Phil Hubbard? 5x expanded by TonyTheTiger (talk). Nominated by TonyTheTiger (talk) at 07:35, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
1975–76 Michigan Wolverines men's basketball team
- ... that 1975–76 Michigan Wolverines men's basketball team was ranked in the AP Poll sixteen of seventeen weeks? 5x expanded by TonyTheTiger (talk). Nominated by TonyTheTiger (talk) at 07:35, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
1973–74 Michigan Wolverines men's basketball team
- ... that the 1973–74 Michigan Wolverines men's basketball team included Campy Russell who won the Chicago Tribune Silver Basketball as Big Ten Conference MVP and Johnny Orr who won the Big Ten Coach of the Year? Created by TonyTheTiger (talk). Nominated by TonyTheTiger (talk) at 07:30, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
1974–75 Michigan Wolverines men's basketball team
- ... that the 1974–75 Michigan Wolverines men's basketball team finished the season ranked in the AP Poll, but unranked in the Coaches' Poll? Created by TonyTheTiger (talk). Nominated by TonyTheTiger (talk) at 07:30, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
Frank C. Garland
- ... that after seeing a map of the U.S. that showed higher cancer rates in Northern states, Frank C. Garland did a study that found that increased Vitamin D from sun exposure can reduce colon cancer risk? Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 05:38, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
Sartaj Aziz
- ... that Sartaj Aziz was the Finance Minister when Pakistan conducted its 1998 nuclear tests, and the Foreign Minister of Pakistan during the Kargil war with India in 1999? Created by S h i v a (Visnu) (talk). Nominated by S h i v a (Visnu) (talk) at 05:02, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
List of Major League Baseball hitters with four home runs in one game
- ... that fans threw silver coins onto the field to celebrate Bobby Lowe (pictured) hitting four home runs in a single Major League Baseball game? 5x expanded by Staxringold (talk). Nominated by Staxringold (talk) at 03:50, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
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The article meets DYK standards for length and sourcing and the hook length is fine. The online source from the Sporting News and his obituary in The New York Times both say that fans tossed $160 in coins. At the time, everything other than pennies and nickels were silver, so I don't doubt that there were silver coins included, but the wording "fans threw silver coins" could mean any number of coins. Whatever metal they were made of, $160 worth is a lot of coins and I would suggest wording it as "fans threw $160 in coins", or some variation thereof. Some mention could also be made in the hook that he was the first player to accomplish the feat. Nice article and one that it is absolutely surprising never existed before. Alansohn (talk) 05:53, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
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- The offline source goes to the silver bit. I avoided saying the $ value because without inflation (which starts making this long) it looks odd. The article existed before, this is an expansion nom. How's this for an alt? Staxringold talkcontribs 12:00, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
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- ALT1: ... that fans threw silver coins onto the field to celebrate Bobby Lowe (pictured) hitting four home runs in a single Major League Baseball game, the first player to accomplish the feat?
Arthur Roy Mitchell
- ... that prior to 1940 the Colorado cowboy artist Arthur Roy Mitchell sketched the cover pages of many western pulp magazines? Created by Billy Hathorn (talk). Self nom at 03:44, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
- ALT: ... that in 1959 the cowboy and western artist Arthur Roy Mitchell designed the centennial emblem for the 1859 Colorado gold rush?
Larry Ashmead
- ... that Larry Ashmead wrote the book Bertha Venation: And Hundreds of Other Funny Names of Real People, featuring such people as Hedda Lettuce, Stan Dupp and Jaime Cardinal Sin (pictured) of the Philippines? Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 02:08, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
2010 Pakistan cricket spot-fixing controversy
- ... that the Pakistani High Commissioner to Britain condemned the Int'l Cricket Council's suspension of the Pakistani cricketers charged with spot-fixing in the 4th Pakistan-England Test? Created by S h i v a (Visnu) (talk). Nominated by S h i v a (Visnu) (talk) at 00:57, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on September 4
Kulhar
- ... that a kulhar, a traditional handle-less terracotta cup from North India and Pakistan, gives hot beverages it contains an "earthy" taste and aroma? Created by Hunnjazal (talk). Nominated by PFHLai (talk) at 17:44, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
Mairbek Taisumov
- ... that all of mixed martial artist Mairbek Taisumov's documented victories have come by knockout or submission? Created by Paralympiakos (talk). Self nom at 11:22, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
Diplomatic uniform
- ... that diplomats from some countries still wear ornate diplomatic uniforms on certain occasions? Created by Sandstein (talk). Nominated by Sandstein (talk) at 07:23, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
OK for length, style references. Citations accepted on good faith.Shadygrove2007 (talk) 09:08, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
French Royal Army (1652-1830)
- ...that the French Royal Army (1652-1830) was considered to have been one of the most powerful armies in Europe under Louis XIV?
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- ALT1:...that, from 1652 until 1830 the French royal army fought in eleven major wars?
- ALT2:...that French royal troops invaded Spain to support that that nation's monarch during an 1823 uprising?
- ALT3:...that French royal troops attacked the Spanish Netherlands when portions of that provice were not ceded to Louis XIV as part of his wife's dowry?
- Comment: I personally prefer Alt 3.
Created by DCI2026 (talk). Self nom at 00:30, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
As a protest here, because the article has absolutely nothing to say about the actual subject, but is a tour at breakneck speed of wars France was involved in, and the reasons for and results of them. Whether these wars were fought using poison-dart blowpipes or nuclear weapons, by men or by single-breasted women, will not be discovered from this article. Johnbod (talk) 03:38, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
Tyonajanegen
- ... that Tyonajanegen, a woman from the Oneida tribe, fought in the American Revolutionary War? Created by Gobonobo (talk). Self nom at 23:00, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
Not yet up to 1500 bytes of prose with the prose tool (only 1285 bytes now). Can it be expanded some? Ruhrfisch ><>°° 04:22, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
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- It is good now. Leszek Jańczuk (talk) 10:59, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
1965–66 Michigan Wolverines men's basketball team
- ... that the 1965–66 Michigan Wolverines men's basketball team featured Cazzie Russell who was drafted number one overall following the season? 5x expanded by TonyTheTiger (talk). Nominated by TonyTheTiger (talk) at 21:41, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
B. Frank Heintzleman
- ... that Alaska Territorial Governor B. Frank Heintzleman proposed dividing the territory in two and granting statehood to only one section? 5x expanded by Allen3 (talk). Self nom at 21:35, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
Carrier Strike Group Three
- ... that Carrier Strike Group Three was the first U.S. Navy carrier strike group to make an overseas deployment with a Helicopter Maritime Strike Squadron (HSM) as part of its embarked air wing (pictured)? Created by Marcd30319 (talk). Nominated by Marcd30319 (talk) at 21:03, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
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- Good to go. Leszek Jańczuk (talk) 11:01, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
Parodia tenuicylindrica, Parodia arnostiana, Parodia buiningii
- ... that, though originally described as members of the genus Notocactus, cacti Parodia tenuicylindrica (pictured), P. buiningii and P. arnostiana are now considered members of Parodia? Created by J Milburn (talk). Nominated by J Milburn (talk) at 21:00, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
1964–65 Michigan Wolverines men's basketball team
- ... that the 1964–65 Michigan Wolverines men's basketball team was the first Michigan Wolverines men's basketball team to defeat a number one ranked team? 5x expanded by User:TonyTheTiger (talk). Self nom at 20:58, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
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- (alt)... that the 1964–65 Michigan Wolverines men's basketball team continues to hold the Big Ten Conference single-season rebounding record?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 21:00, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
John Greenhill
- ... that English portrait painter John Greenhill died, aged only 32, after being found in the gutter following a drinking session at the Vine Tavern in London? Created by Shadygrove2007 (talk). Self nom at 20:42, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
Done The article is transcribed and edited from Dictionary of National Biography - I have added a template just to clarify. All apparently "unsourced" statements are in the DNB reference. Shadygrove2007 (talk) 10:23, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
- Ok, I think we still need inline citations regardless of whether it came from a PD source. Also, I saw a few weeks ago that there was a discussion on whether or not it was acceptable to use PD sources for DYK or not. Tarebia granifera (the article that was discussed) didn't appear on the main page and as that was only a couple of weeks ago, I'm not sure if this should either. Smartse (talk) 17:12, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
Samuel Eyles Pierce
- ... that English minister Samuel Eyles Pierce was accused him of antinomianism by his congregation in Truro and that even his wife withdrew her financial support of his ministry? Created by Dr. Blofeld (talk), Rosiestep (talk). Nominated by Dr. Blofeld (talk) at 20:30, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
Hook is referenced to ONDB which requires subscription. Dr. Blofeld 20:30, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
Hamilton Watch Complex
- ... that the former factory and headquarters (pictured) of the Hamilton Watch Company, in Lancaster, Pennsylvania, was converted into an apartment and condominium complex? Created by Niagara (talk). Self nom at 19:47, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
Romstrade
- ... that Romstrade is the largest construction company in Romania? Created by Bine Mai (talk). Self nom at 19:38, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
1963–64 Michigan Wolverines men's basketball team
- ... that the 1963–64 Michigan Wolverines men's basketball team earned the University of Michigan its first trip to the NCAA Men's Division I Basketball Tournament final four? Created by TonyTheTiger (talk). Nominated by TonyTheTiger (talk) at 18:25, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
Charles "Buffalo" Jones
- ... that Charles "Buffalo" Jones, a frontiersman who helped to preserve the buffalo from extinction, was the inspiration for Zane Grey's The Last of the Plainsmen?
- ALT:... that Charles "Buffalo" Jones, the first game warden at Yellowstone National Park, once roped an unruly bear and spanked the animal on its rear?
Created/expanded by Billy Hathorn (Billy Hathorn talk). Self nom at 18:05, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
Francis Farm Petroglyphs
- ... that the Francis Farm Petroglyphs are among Pennsylvania's leading petroglyph sites, even though the culture of their creators is unknown? Created by Nyttend (talk). Self nom at 17:55, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
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Good to go Thelmadatter (talk) 03:11, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
Bògòlanfini
- ... that Bògòlanfini (pictured), a traditional Malian fabric, is dyed with fermented mud? 5x expanded by Sandstein (talk). Nominated by Sandstein (talk) at 17:06, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
Mithya
- ... that Indian film Mithya marked the singing debut of Sanchita Bhattyacharya in the Hindi cinema industry? 5x expanded by Mspraveen (talk). Self nom at 16:31, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
Albany Convention Center
- ... that the design of the Albany Convention Center in Albany, New York, includes saving the city's oldest building (pictured) and possibly using it as a visitor center? Created by UpstateNYer (talk). Self nom at 15:29, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
Michael S. Smith (interior designer)
- ... that interior designer Michael S. Smith is responsible for the 2010 makeover of the White House Oval Office. --Hegvald (talk) 15:13, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
Censorship in Spain
- ... that as a result of Censorship in Spain same-sex marriage was legalized only 24 years after divorce was legalized? Created by Tommy2010 (talk). Self nom at 14:15, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
That's not censorship - it shouldn't even be in the article, never mind the hook. Quite a bit of the article isn't about censorship in fact! Perhaps something about censorship under Franco, added to the article, would make a decent hook. But, article needs quite a lot of work to focus on its supposed topic to justify front page exposure. Rd232 talk 14:45, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
Amantaka Hotel
- ... that Jude Law and Sienna Miller reportedly stayed at the Amantaka Hotel in Luang Prabang, Laos in August 2010? Created by Dr. Blofeld (talk). Nominated by Dr. Blofeld (talk) at 13:30, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
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- Is that so?
Torgeir Vraa
- ... that in the Norwegian 1906 election second round of voting, Torgeir Vraa was endorsed by the Liberal Party, which he left in 1897 together with Christopher Hornsrud? Created by Geschichte (talk). Self nom at 12:28, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
Niels Ødegaard
- ... that Niels Ødegaard of Gjøvik is the longest-sitting mayor in any Norwegian municipality? Created by Geschichte (talk). Self nom at 12:23, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
Parachartergus apicalis
- ... that the genitalia of male Parachartergus apicalis (pictured) can perform movements of startling complexity?
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- ALT1:... that male Parachartergus apicalis (pictured) may stimulate females with their genitalia during courtship?
- ALT2:... that Parachartergus apicalis (pictured) will attack Camponotus atriceps if they try to tend their treehoppers?
Created by Smartse (talk). Nominated by Smartse (talk) at 12:09, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
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alt1 makes me think "so what?". main hook is cool but "startling complexity", which you quote in the article, does not appear in ref 6 (not via a pdf title at least). alt2 does not have a ref right after it and does not seem to appear in ref 5. — Rlevse • Talk • 12:24, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
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- Re alt1 - fair enough, I just found it funny reading the reference. The references for the other two are scans so a pdf title doesn't work (I don't know how google scholar manages to do title them?!). The main hook is discussed on page 296 of the reference cited, alt2 is on page 126, in the last paragraph before the discussion of this ref. I can add more reference tags if you would like but I thought one per paragraph was sufficient. Thanks for the review. Smartse (talk) 09:26, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
LucyPhone
- ... that LucyPhone allows consumers to avoid the wait time that occurs when call center operators place them on hold? Created by Cunard (talk). Nominated by Cunard (talk) at 07:13, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
Jeshua Anderson
- ... that Jeshua Anderson broke the 22-year old U.S. high school record in the 300 m hurdles at the 2007 CIF State Track and Field Championships? Created by Bender235 (talk). Self nom at 00:08, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on September 3
Peggy Ann Jones
- ... that after a 15-year career as a principal with the D'Oyly Carte Opera Company, Peggy Ann Jones moved to musicals, including in the original cast of The Phantom of the Opera ? Created by Ssilvers (talk). Nominated by Ssilvers (talk) at 15:12, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
Tirana Circus
- ... that Ymer Pampuri, former World record holder in weightlifting has worked all his life in the Tirana Circus as an acrobat? Created by Vinie007 (talk). Nominated by Sulmues (talk) at 03:41, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
September 2010 Quetta bombing
- ... that 73 people were killed in Quetta while marching to protest Israel's control of Jerusalem? Created by Wikireader41 (talk). Nominated by Chesdovi (talk) at 01:18, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
September 2010 Quetta bombing
The Grand Design (book)
- ... that Stephen Hawking and Leonard Mlodinow explain in their new book that "the universe can and will create itself from nothing" without invoking of God? Created by Alokprasad84 (talk), Mbz1 (talk) and Drbogdan (talk). Self nom at 21:16, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
length, style and references check out. Ready to go. Shadygrove2007 (talk) 09:15, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
Palaeovespa
- ... that at least one species of the extinct wasp Palaeovespa (fossil pictured) fed catepillars to its larvae? 5x expanded by Kevmin (talk). Self nom at 14:40, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
Richard Etchberger
- ... that Medal of Honor recipient Richard Etchberger's original nomination for the medal was rejected because the mission he was on was classified? Created by Jwillbur (talk). Self nom at 06:00, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
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- His medal is scheduled be presented on September 21, so it might be cool to postpone the hook till then. In which case an alt hook could be used:
- Alt 1:... that United States Air Force airman Richard Etchberger will posthumously receive the Medal of Honor today? — jwillbur 06:09, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
Bellevue, Schenectady, New York
- ... that 39.2% of Schenectady, New York's Bellevue neighborhood is zoned industrial, but excluding the General Electric plant it is only 1%? Created by Camelbinky (talk). Self nom at 03:11, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
Sod House Ranch
- ... that Oregon cattle baron, Peter French, was murdered near the Sod House Ranch in 1897?
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- Comment: Hook source is from "The Oregon Desert", p.120.
Created by Orygun (talk). Nominated by Orygun (talk) at 00:17, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
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Length, style and references OK.Shadygrove2007 (talk) 13:47, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
Pancyclic graph
- ... that every round-robin tournament either has a set of players who win all games against players outside the set, or its graph of wins and losses is pancyclic, having directed cycles of all lengths? Created by David Eppstein (talk). Self nom at 22:26, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
Daniel P. Davison
- ... that as president of U.S. Trust, Daniel P. Davison classified clients with less than $300,000 in assets as "poor", but was willing to have staff walk a dog for those with assets exceeding $2 million? Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 21:18, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
Church of St John sub Castro, Lewes, Russian Memorial, Lewes, The Finnish Prisoner
- ... that Tsar Alexander II of Russia had a monument (pictured) erected in an English churchyard commemorating Finnish prisoners of war whose story inspired a 2007 opera?
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- Comment: All 3 articles moved from sandbox to mainspace on 3 September.
Created by Struway2 (talk). Self nom at 19:59, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
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- If it helps: the two halves of the hook (Tsar's memorial to prisoners, story inspiring opera) appear separately in each article:
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- in Church: both in Russian Memorial section, refs #27 and 29;
- in Memorial: ref #14 in Memorial section, ref #12 in Legacy section;
- in Opera: ref #3 in Background section, ref #1 in Production section.
Perfume cushion
- ... that a dream pillow helps promote sleep? Created by Doug Coldwell (talk). Self nom at 19:56, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
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- Do they really? Has Africa Wiki - FiveAfrica.Com found the cure for insomnia? In the article, this claim is sourced to [1] and [2], which are not reliable sources. We can't run this hook. Sandstein 22:48, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
- In the article I wrote: These "herb pillows" of the 18th, 19th and 20th centuries of aromatic herbs were believed to help the advancement of sleep. The Walter book source reference says: The "herb pillows" of the eighteenth and nineteenth centuries (little sacks of aromatic herbs thought to be a remedy for sleeplessness) always included lavender, clovepinks and costmary as principal ingredients. The White book source reference says: There are several herbs that have a reputation for easing insomnia, and by creating a blend of these leaves and flowers, you can make small "herb pillows" to help you sleep. I am just going by the book source references.--Doug Coldwell talk 23:51, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
- Sorry, I titleed the article for the words "promote sleep" used in the hook and found the text "are made with sleep inducing ingredients like ... that help promote sleep", which is sourced to these unreliable sources. If the hook is to refer to the text "were believed to help the advancement of sleep", then that is exactly what the hook should say. There's a big difference between us reporting somebody else's belief that these cushions help one sleep, or us as an encyclopedia asserting that they do. See WP:NOR. Sandstein 06:06, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
- ALT1: "... that a "dream pillow" is a type of perfume cushion filled with aromatic herbs claimed to promote sleep?" Shadygrove2007 (talk) 09:42, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
- ALT2: "... that a dream pillow is believed to help the advancement of sleep?"--Doug Coldwell talk 11:45, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
Brazilian ironclad Rio de Janeiro
- ... that the Brazilian ironclad Rio de Janeiro struck two mines on 2 September 1866, during the War of the Triple Alliance, and sank instantly with the loss of 53 of her crew? 5x expanded by Sturmvogel 66 (talk). Nominated by Sturmvogel 66 (talk) at 18:52, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
Andhra Pradesh Vidhan Parishad
- ... that the Andhra Pradesh Vidhan Parishad was created in 1958, abolished in 1985 and re-created in 2007? Created by S h i v a (Visnu) (talk). Nominated by S h i v a (Visnu) (talk) at 18:25, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
Jacoby & Meyers
- ... that after the U.S. Supreme Court legalized the practice in the 1977 case Bates v. State Bar of Arizona, the law firm of Jacoby & Meyers was the first in the United States to advertise on television? Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 16:27, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
Colonia Exhipódromo de Peralvillo
- ... that Mexico City's first formal horse racing track was built in Colonia Exhipódromo de Peralvillo? Created by Thelmadatter (talk). Self nom at 15:47, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
Emu-wren, Southern Emu-wren, Rufous-crowned Emu-wren, Mallee Emu-wren
- ... that the common name Emu-wren of the Southern, Rufous-crowned and Mallee Emu-wrens comes from their emu-like tail feathers?
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5x expanded by Casliber (talk). Nominated by Casliber (talk) at 15:23, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
South Salem Academy
- ... that the village of South Salem, Ohio was founded to serve the needs of the Salem Academy? Created by Nyttend (talk). Self nom at 13:39, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
List of NME number-one singles from the 1980s
- ... that Elton John had a number one in the 1980s with "Nikita"? Created by Rambo's Revenge (talk). Self nom at 11:59, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
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The article is a few hundred characters below the required 1,500. The article would benefit from some more discussion of the artists and songs that made the list, which should be readily available from sources and would easily put the article over the 1,500-character minimum for article prose. Alansohn (talk) 14:34, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
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- Sorry about that. It is now over the 1,500 limit. I'll see if I can expand it further in future but that will do for now. Rambo's Revenge (talk) 18:20, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
The Most Unwanted Song
- ... that "The Most Unwanted Song" includes bagpipes, a children's choir, and an opera singer who raps about cowboys? Created by 28bytes (talk). Self nom at 08:38, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
Thomas Tregosse
- ... that Puritan minister Thomas Tregosse was imprisoned for holding a Conventicle in Budock? Created by Rosiestep (talk). Self nom at 07:22, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
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Style, length all OK. Refs in good faith. But need to expand the statement "He converted" as it is not clear exactly what is meant. Shadygrove2007 (talk) 10:00, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
Caleb Bailey
- ... that Corsair pilots of Caleb Bailey's Marine Aircraft Group 11 would make chocolate ice cream on missions in the Palau campaign during World War II? Created by Strikehold (talk). Nominated by Strikehold (talk) at 07:14, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
List of planetary features with Māori names
- ... that a hydrocarbon lake on Saturn's moon Titan and an active volcano on Jupiter's moon Io are among the Solar System features named after deities from Māori mythology? Created by Iridia (talk). Self nom at 06:40, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
Marty Huff
- ... that Michigan linebacker Marty Huff intercepted three passes thrown in one game by Hall of Fame quarterback Mike Phipps and played professional football in the NFL, CFL and WFL? Created by Cbl62 (talk). Self nom at 06:03, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
Eight Bells
- ... that Winslow Homer's 1886 oil on canvas Eight Bells inspired the artist N.C. Wyeth to name his Maine home after the painting? Created/expanded by JNW (talk). Nominated by JNW (talk) at 04:07, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on September 2
Nicola Zerola
- ... that Italian singer Nicola Zerola (pictured) made his professional debut in 1898 as a baritone in Ruggero Leoncavallo's Pagliacci, but later became a tenor, debuting in another role in the same opera in 1903? Created by 4meter4 (talk). Nominated by PFHLai (talk) at 09:44, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
Angiolina Bosio
- ... that Italian soprano Angiolina Bosio (pictured) moved to Russia in 1853, became the highest paid singer at the Bolshoi Kamenny Theatre in St Petersburg and often performed with Tsar Alexander II in attendance?
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- (alt.hook)... that Italian operatic soprano Angiolina Bosio (pictured) moved to Russia in 1853 and became the highest paid singer at the Bolshoi Kamenny Theatre in Saint Petersburg?
Created by 4meter4 (talk). Nominated by PFHLai (talk) at 12:30, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
Carlo Scalzi
- ... that Italian castrato Carlo Scalzi performed at the wedding of Anne, Princess Royal and William IV, Prince of Orange in London, 1734? Created by 4meter4 (talk). Nominated by PFHLai (talk) at 11:46, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
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Foreign language sources AGF Thelmadatter (talk) 03:15, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
Craig telescope
- ... that the Craig telescope in Wandsworth Common, London, was once the world's largest refracting telescope? Created by Fotaun (talk). Nominated by PFHLai (talk) at 06:57, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
MV Mi Amigo
- ... that the Radio Caroline ship Mi Amigo (pictured) served with the Kriegsmarine during the Second World War? Created by Mjroots (talk). Nominated by Mjroots (talk) at 20:26, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
Date, length, hook, and source verified. Wilhelmina Will (talk) 00:21, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
Dhuvjan Monastery
- ... that the 11th century Dhuvjan Monastery in Albania contained an icon which included some remains of very important early Christianity martyrs? Created by Your Über Monkey (talk). Nominated by Sulmues (talk) at 18:25, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
Brazilian ironclad Tamandaré
- ... that the engines of the Brazilian ironclad Tamandaré broke down while she was passing in front of the Paraguayan guns at Curupaity during the War of the Triple Alliance and she had to be towed to safety by the ironclad Silvado? 5x expanded by Sturmvogel 66 (talk). Nominated by Sturmvogel 66 (talk) at 17:14, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
Jack Pitney
- ... that BMW advertising executive Jack Pitney convinced the company to market the Mini in the U.S., despite concerns that American buyers would not buy cars that small given the popularity of SUVs? Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 12:50, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
Lewis Gregory
- ... that on his List A cricket debut, Lewis Gregory claimed four wickets against the Pakistanis? Created by Harrias (talk). Self nom at 10:54, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
Gene Englund
- ... that Gene Englund won the NCAA Men's Division I Basketball Tournament and National Basketball League championship in back-to-back seasons? Created by Jrcla2 (talk). Self nom at 00:12, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
HMS Aeolus (1801)
- ... that HMS Aeolus was involved in the pursuit of USS Constitution, and the capture of USS Nautilus, the first warship lost by either side in the War of 1812? 5x expanded by Benea (talk). Self nom at 23:59, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
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Good to go. AGF for the offline source.--White Shadows Your guess is as good as mine 21:27, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
Davara
- ... that the Davara was the first British trawler to be sunk in World War II? Created by White Shadows (talk). Nominated by White Shadows (talk) at 22:36, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
- NOTE: I've just finished this article in my sandbox after several weeks of leaving it in my userspace. DYK rules mean that this is still eligible for a DYK since it was just transferred into the mainspace today :)-White Shadows Your guess is as good as mine 22:36, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
Skipper W
- ... that the American Quarter Horse stallion Skipper W got his chance as a breeding stallion when his sire slipped on some ice and broke his neck? Created by Ealdgyth (talk). Self nom at 21:06, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
Scouter's Key Award
- ... that there are eight different ways to earn the Scouter's Key Award? Created by Ericalford (talk). Nominated by Rlevse (talk) at 19:55, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
C. Joseph Genster, Metrecal
- ... that C. Joseph Genster of Mead Johnson developed Metrecal in 1959 as part of a weight loss craze that had dieters subsist on nothing other than the 900 calories offered by drinking four cans a day? Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 17:35, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
John Phillips (fighter)
- ... that John Phillips was the first fighter to test positive for banned substances in the Cage Rage promotion? Created by Paralympiakos (talk). Self nom at 16:59, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
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- If this is successful, just make sure that it links to John Phillips (fighter), not John Phillips. Cheers. Paralympiakos (talk) 17:02, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
Movimiento 2D
- ... that the Movimiento 2D is a Venezuelan opposition movement founded and led by the editor/proprietor of the daily El Nacional? Created by Rd232 (talk). Self nom at 16:06, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
Greenbelt Cooperative Publishing Assn., Inc. v. Bresler, Dorothy Sucher
- ... that the U.S. Supreme Court ruled in Greenbelt Cooperative Publishing Assn., Inc. v. Bresler that the use of the word "blackmail" in an article by reporter Dorothy Sucher did not constitute libel? Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 15:05, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
Marvin Bracy
- ... that in May 2010 Marvin Bracy would have bettered the world youth best in the 100 metres, if it had not been for the wind assistance? Created by Bender235 (talk). Self nom at 14:02, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
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The hook fact doesn't seem to have a citation/reference in the article. --Demiurge1000 (talk) 15:16, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
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- Fixed. That 10.19 s time is referenced ([3] is annother source). List of world youth bests in athletics is the other source, for the current WYB by Parson. —bender235 (talk) 15:37, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
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- Really that needs citing in the article as well then, not just mentioned here. Also Africa Wiki - FiveAfrica.Com can't cite other Africa Wiki - FiveAfrica.Com articles as sources. --Demiurge1000 (talk) 16:23, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
Colonia Cuauhtémoc, Mexico City
- ... that while home to skyscrapers such as the Torre Mayor(pictured) and the Mexican headquarters of HSBC, Colonia Cuauhtémoc in Mexico City is primarily residential? Created by Thelmadatter (talk). Self nom at 13:56, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
Mr San Peppy
- ... that in 2011 the American Quarter Horse stallion Mr San Peppy will join his son Peppy San Badger and his full brother Peppy San in the American Quarter Horse Hall of Fame? Created by Ealdgyth (talk). Self nom at 13:53, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
Daniel Tabera
- ... that the Spanish mixed martial artist Daniel Tabera has defeated multiple opponents on two separate occasions?
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... that Daniel Tabera is the only man to have held the worldwide-known Gilbert Yvel to a draw? Created by Paralympiakos (talk). Self nom at 11:56, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
Luis Beltrán Prieto Figueroa
- ... that in 1967 Venezuela's ruling Democratic Action party denied the winner of its primary election the nomination for the 1968 presidential race - for being too leftwing? Created by Rd232 (talk). Self nom at 09:59, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
Protein pigeon homolog
- ... that inhibiting protein pigeon homolog, may provide a treatment for Alzheimer's disease? Created by Boghog2 (talk). Self nom at 05:35, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
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- ALT1: ... that inhibiting protein pigeon homolog may provide a treatment for Alzheimer's disease? Brilliant! Your hook is much better.
Done
- I think people would be more likely to click on it like that. One other thing, do we know what its function is other than to cause the formation of beta amyloid? If we do it would be good to include it. Smartse (talk) 16:33, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
- I will see what else I can dig up on this protein and expand the function section if possible. Cheers. Boghog (talk) 19:56, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
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- Unfortunately not much else is known about the function of this protein. However I have expanded the article significantly to include more information on homologous genes in other species as well as more details on the size and location of the gene and the transcribed protein. Boghog (talk) 09:12, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
Done
- Unfortunately not much else is known about the function of this protein. However I have expanded the article significantly to include more information on homologous genes in other species as well as more details on the size and location of the gene and the transcribed protein. Boghog (talk) 09:12, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
- I've edited your hook slightly to take out an unneeded comma. I hope that's OK. -- L'ecrivant (talk) 22:29, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
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- I will see what else I can dig up on this protein and expand the function section if possible. Cheers. Boghog (talk) 19:56, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
- I think people would be more likely to click on it like that. One other thing, do we know what its function is other than to cause the formation of beta amyloid? If we do it would be good to include it. Smartse (talk) 16:33, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that inhibiting protein pigeon homolog may provide a treatment for Alzheimer's disease? Brilliant! Your hook is much better.
ALT1 is good to go. Thanks for adding more details, I can see why there isn't much information available now. I've linked inhibitor to enzyme inhibitor in the hook as I thought the average person might not understand what it means. I know it isn't perfect, but that article discusses the concept in general. Smartse (talk) 09:50, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
Church of Saint Laud
- ... that the Church of Saint Laud's original, octagonal, Gothic-panelled font is buried under the church floor? Created by Rosiestep (talk). Self nom at 05:35, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
Labrador Sea, Northwest Atlantic Mid-Ocean Channel
- ... that the Labrador Sea (pictured) contains NAMOC, one of the world's longest underwater channels?
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- Comment: See NAMOC article. Materialscientist (talk) 05:30, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
5x expanded by Materialscientist (talk). Nominated by Materialscientist (talk) at 05:30, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
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5x expansion of Labrador Sea verified, NAMOC is new and of sufficient length. AGF for the hook, it seems likely enough. Smartse (talk) 16:55, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
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- ALT1 ... that the Labrador Sea (pictured) contains the Northwest Atlantic Mid-Ocean Channel, one of the world's longest underwater channels?
- I suggest this slightly amended hook, as I feel that the NAMOC acronym needs to be spelled out and the original hook was missing the word "the". Also, only one item should in bold type. -- L'ecrivant (talk) 22:32, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
Coprinopsis variegata
- ... that scaly ink cap mushrooms (pictured) can attack and digest soil bacteria by growing out hyphae that secrete digestive chemicals? Created by Sasata (talk). Self nom at 04:28, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
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- ALT1... that scaly ink cap mushrooms (pictured) can attack and digest soil bacteria by growing hyphae that secrete digestive enzymes?
- You've written that they are chemicals in the article, but could you check the source to see if they are in fact enzymes? It seems more likely to me. Smartse (talk) 16:20, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
- I agree they are likely enzymes, but the source uses "compounds", and does not go into any detail about the nature of these compounds. I also checked the primary source, and the author does not speculate about this, so I think we should go with the generic "compounds" as in Alt2 (added slight tweak in wording to avoid repetition of "digest"). Thanks for checking, Sasata (talk) 19:24, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
- ALT2... that scaly ink cap mushrooms (pictured) can attack and consume soil bacteria by growing hyphae that secrete digestive compounds?
- You've written that they are chemicals in the article, but could you check the source to see if they are in fact enzymes? It seems more likely to me. Smartse (talk) 16:20, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
- ALT1... that scaly ink cap mushrooms (pictured) can attack and digest soil bacteria by growing hyphae that secrete digestive enzymes?
1967–68 ABA season
- ... that the New Jersey Americans were supposed to play a playoff game on their home court in the 1967–68 ABA season, but the Teaneck Armory (pictured) was booked by the circus and the team had to forfeit the game? 5x expanded by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 03:20, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
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- The reference provided goes to the wrong article. I can't find the one you used, but I find another that will works: http://news.google.com/newspapers?id=ligsAAAAIBAJ&sjid=jMYEAAAAIBAJ&pg=4453,3817142. Otherwise, everything checks out.—Chris!c/t 20:15, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
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Lawrence E. Roberts
- ... that Lawrence E. Roberts was a pilot with the Tuskegee Airmen, and a colonel in the United States Air Force, and the father of newscaster Robin Roberts? Created by Rlevse (talk). Self nom at 02:46, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
Ernest Spybuck
- ... that many of the renowned autoethnographic works of Absentee-Shawnee artist Ernest Spybuck are held by the National Museum of the American Indian? Created by Taoboy49 (talk). Nominated by Sadads (talk) at 02:15, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
Jammu and Kashmir Legislative Council
- ... that 9 out of the 36 members of the Jammu and Kashmir Legislative Council are to be elected exclusively by certified teachers and local governing bodies? Created by S h i v a (Visnu) (talk). Nominated by S h i v a (Visnu) (talk) at 00:43, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on September 1
King of the Ring (2006)
- ... that World Wrestling Entertainment brought back the King of the Ring tournament in 2006 for the first time since discontinuing it in 2002? 5x expanded by Richard "Wrestler" Lopez (talk). Nominated by GaryColemanFan (talk) at 16:56, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
Main Street Historic District (Medina, New York)
- ... that portions of an 1820s mill race may remain underneath Main Street (pictured) in Medina, New York?
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- Comment: Source for fact is on p. 54 of document (going by page numbers assigned by JavaScript reading software).
5x expanded by Daniel Case (talk). Nominated by Daniel Case (talk) at 20:10, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
Wolfgang Krause
- ... that Wolfgang Krause continued his scholarly work in runology even after he became blind? Created by Yngvadottir (talk). Self nom at 17:44, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
Sonia Prina
- ... that Sonia Prina (pictured) performed the contralto title role of Antonio Vivaldi's opera Orlando furioso in the Frankfurt Opera, staged as a rocker? Created by 4meter4 (talk), Gerda Arendt (talk). Nominated by Gerda Arendt (talk) at 09:35, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
Proyecto Dos
- ... that the 2008 thriller Proyecto Dos is the feature film debut of Spanish television director Guillermo Fernández Groizard?
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5x expanded by MichaelQSchmidt (talk). Self nom at 04:58, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
Respect (The Bill)
- ... that in the series finale to The Bill, called Respect, all 17 current cast members appeared in the final episode? Created by Spike1999 (talk). Nominated by 5 albert square (talk) at 01:45, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
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Only one ref, plot section unref'd, external links not properly formatted. — Rlevse • Talk • 11:23, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
- Should now have more than one ref, external links now properly formatted --5 albert square (talk) 22:34, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
Francis Sumner (millowner)
- ... that before becoming a Glossop mill owner, Francis Sumner lived at Glossop Hall (pictured) after his mother and father died? 5x expanded by Victuallers (talk) and create by ClemRutter. Self nom at 22:27, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
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- Not a comment about this hook's suitability, but I will just say that as a resident of this tiny town, this is my favourite hook ever! Paralympiakos (talk) 22:32, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
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- With regards this one, I'm a little confused. It may be because it's early and I'm a little groggy, but it seems as though the source suggests he lived at Glossop Hall WITH his mother, following his father's death. Have I misinterpreted? Paralympiakos (talk) 10:19, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks, you are right... he lost his mother whilst there. Ive added "with new parents". OK? Victuallers (talk) 16:27, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
- Re-reading that source made me feel thoroughly stupid. I had to read it about five times to gain an understanding. My current understanding is that Ann Sumner (mother) died when Francis was a toddler. Robert Sumner (father) marries Barbara [Sumner] (now stepmother), before Robert (father) dies. Then Francis lives with stepmother and step-grandfather in Glossop Hall. Is that correct? If so, I'm happy to tick this one off. Paralympiakos (talk) 17:02, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
- Returned to original wording as it was correct Victuallers (talk) 16:05, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
- Re-reading that source made me feel thoroughly stupid. I had to read it about five times to gain an understanding. My current understanding is that Ann Sumner (mother) died when Francis was a toddler. Robert Sumner (father) marries Barbara [Sumner] (now stepmother), before Robert (father) dies. Then Francis lives with stepmother and step-grandfather in Glossop Hall. Is that correct? If so, I'm happy to tick this one off. Paralympiakos (talk) 17:02, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
Brazilian ironclad Barroso
- ... that the Brazilian ironclad Barroso was hit 20 times on 26–28 March 1866 when she bombarded the Paraguayan fortifications at Curupaity during the War of the Triple Alliance, but not significantly damaged? 5x expanded by Sturmvogel 66 (talk). Nominated by Sturmvogel 66 (talk) at 18:15, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
Petar Parchevich
- ... that Bulgarian Roman Catholic archbishop and diplomat Petar Parchevich was made baron by the Habsburgs? Created by TodorBozhinov (talk). Nominated by TodorBozhinov (talk) at 13:26, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
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Length and date verified; Bulgarian-language references accepted on good faith. - Biruitorul Talk 20:57, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
Jan Błachowicz
- ... that after missing the whole of 2009, Jan Błachowicz returned at KSW XIII to defeat two opponents on the same night? Created by Paralympiakos (talk). Self nom at 11:43, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
Dawid Baziak
- ... that Dawid Baziak began his professional mixed martial arts career with five consecutive technical knockout victories?
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... that Dawid Baziak defeated Maxim Grishin at KSW XII in a mixed martial arts bout that was viewed by more than six million people in Poland Created by Paralympiakos (talk). Self nom at 11:38, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
Scottish surnames
- ... that the earliest Scottish surnames were already hereditary in England, before arriving in Scotland with Anglo-Norman settlers in the 12th century? Created by Brianann MacAmhlaidh (talk). Self nom at 09:29, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
The Bill
- ... that Respect: Part 2 was the last episode of British television drama series The Bill to air on television after 26 years on air? 5x expanded by 5 albert square (talk). Nominated by Fridae'sDoom (talk) at 08:07, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
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this was 71K on Aug 21, now it's 75K. No where near a 1X expansion, much less 5X. — Rlevse • Talk • 02:08, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
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- Oh, so what does it need to meet the criteria? Ғяіᴅaз'§Đøøм | Tea and biscuits? 07:26, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
- A 5X expansion in prose. since it's 75k you'd have to get it to 425K. Why did you think this was a 5K expansion? — Rlevse • Talk • 14:45, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
- I think that the nominator meant to out forward Respect (The Bill), which was created on Sep 1. GeeJo (t)⁄(c) • 15:40, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
1996 Football League Second Division play-off Final
- ... that association football club Bradford City's first game at Wembley Stadium in their 93-year history was the 1996 Football League Second Division play-off Final? Created by User:Brad78 (talk). Self nom at 02:36, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
Final Shot: The Hank Gathers Story
- ... that the biopic film Final Shot: The Hank Gathers Story is a dramatized recreation of Hank Gathers' struggle to leave a North Philadelphia ghetto to become a basketball player for the Loyola Marymount Lions?? Created by MichaelQSchmidt (talk). Self nom at 02:19, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
Virgil Ardelean
- ... that Romanian police officer Virgil Ardelean avoided having to take sides in the 1989 Revolution by feigning deafness when his superior ordered him to become involved, instead getting sent to the hospital and kept in bed for otitis? Created by Biruitorul (talk). Self nom at 00:34, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
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- Umm, as far as I can see, the article is much better referenced than just a single ref at the end of each paragraph. ""The village is populated by ethnic Hungarians and Roma" is clearly referenced in ref 1 in the present tense (i.e., it's still populated by Hungarians and Roma). While your comment about the Ponzi scheme action may have some validity, I don't really think it's a major concern, so as to require "close checking before [the article] is appropriate as front page material". This is DYK, not FAC.
- I have reviewed the article for DYK (hook referencing, length and date) and I intend to verify it, so please reply as soon as you can if you have any further comments. Todor→Bozhinov 18:08, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
- Thank you both from your comments. In regard to the Caritas issue, I have added another source supporting the claim, rephrased it a little, and added Ardelean's denial that there were hidden diskettes. Everyone agrees they were titleed, but there is uncertainty about other facts, and I have tried to reflect that. In terms of what is sourced from where, every footnote refers to the text preceding it within the paragraph, so for instance the first paragraph is sourced to the Ziua article. Please let me know if I can alleviate other concerns, either here or on the talk page. - Biruitorul Talk 20:57, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
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All looks good. Reference for the hook AGF because I can't read that particular language. Thank you for the further improvements to, and clarifications about, the article. --Demiurge1000 (talk) 21:18, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
List of American Basketball Association awards and honors
- ... that a total of 80 American Basketball Association (ABA) players and executives have received at least one award or honor? Created by K. Annoyomous (talk). Self nom at 22:46, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
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- I have read through the article and I have no issue with the length of the article and hook or any concern about the factual accuracy of the hook. My question is that we should probably avoid hooks that are basically in the form that "there are X entries on List Y", which could be generated for any list article nominated at DYK. There were so many great athletes who played in the ABA, and making some mention about the unique accomplishments of any one of the 80 basketball players mentioned in the article would probably make for a better hook. Alansohn (talk) 15:12, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
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Rena Kubota
- ... that Rena Kubota has been crowned world champion at the previous two Women's Shoot Boxing Tournaments? Created by Jfgslo (talk). Nominated by GeeJo (talk) at 22:03, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
Daniel Webster (Florida politician)
- ... that former Speaker of the Florida House of Representatives Daniel Webster (pictured) served in the Florida legislature for 28 years, making him the longest-serving legislator in Florida history? 5x expanded by Scapler (talk). Self nom at 21:37, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
- ALT 1: ... that Daniel Webster (pictured) was the first Republican Speaker of the Florida House of Representatives since Reconstruction?
Kucadikadi
- ... that the Kucadikadi are a band of Northern Paiute Native Americans, whose names translates to "brine fly eaters"? Created by Uyvsdi (talk). Self nom at 21:26, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
Rin Grand Hotel
- ... that the Rin Grand Hotel in Bucharest, Romania is the largest hotel in Europe with 1,459 rooms? 5x expanded by Bine Mai (talk). Self nom at 21:15, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
Lepidophthalmus turneranus
- ... that Cameroon is named after the crustacean Lepidophthalmus turneranus (pictured) which Portuguese settlers observed swarming in the Wouri River in the 15th century? Created by Stemonitis (talk). Self nom at 21:14, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
First Māori elections, 4th New Zealand Parliament
- ... that Māori men achieved universal suffrage in the First Māori elections, midway through the term of the 4th New Zealand Parliament in 1868, twelve years before the European colonists (Māori MP pictured)?
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- Comment: Both articles were created in userspace and were moved to mainspace on 1 September.
Created by Schwede66 (talk). Self nom at 19:34, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
Edward Mead Johnson, Mead Johnson
- ... that in 1905 Edward Mead Johnson established Mead Johnson, maker of Enfamil and other nutrition products, after leaving the Johnson & Johnson firm that he had co-founded with his brothers in 1886? 5x expanded by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 19:03, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
Electrica
- ... that Electrica has an electric power distribution network of 116,500 km? 5x expanded by Bine Mai (talk). Self nom at 17:46, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
Franklin Brito
- ... that Venezuelan farmer Franklin Brito died after a hunger strike in protest of government takeover of his farm 7 years ago? Created by Piotrus (talk). Nominated by Piotrus (talk) at 17:20, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
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- Update: please also credit User:Rd232, who is helping to further expand this article. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk 18:36, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
The facts in this case are so in dispute that I'm not sure an WP:NPOV hook can be drafted. (For example the proposal above doesn't convey the government's position that there was no such takeover, because the disputed titles applied to land that wasn't Brito's.) It's also already included in ITN's "recent deaths". If we must have it, though, we might as well correct a substantial flaw in much of the Western media coverage, which is the impression that Brito lost his entire farm, and have some kind of hook which clarifies the dispute was over part of his farm. Rd232 talk 19:57, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
Aziz Çami
- ... that in 1931 Aziz Çami tried to assassinate Zog of Albania when the king was exiting the Vienna State Opera? Created by ZjarriRrethues (talk). Nominated by Sulmues (talk) at 16:16, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
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Date, length and ref verified. You guys had a badass king there, pulling out a gun and returning fire! :) Todor→Bozhinov 17:58, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
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- Very badass! I think this fact deserves to be highlighted! I'd like to suggest an alternative hook:
- ALT1 ... that when Aziz Çami tried to assassinate Zog of Albania in the Vienna State Opera house in 1931, the king pulled out his own pistol and returned fire? -- L'ecrivant (talk) 22:38, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
- The alternative hook sounds better so if Sulmues and Todor agree too, this hook should be used.--— ZjarriRrethues — talk 22:57, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
St John the Evangelist's Church, Leeds
- ... that the Jacobean fittings (screen pictured) in St John the Evangelist's Church, Leeds, West Yorkshire have been described as the glory of the church? Created by Peter I. Vardy (talk). Self nom at 14:50, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
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Length, style and refs Ok. Shadygrove2007 (talk) 10:06, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
value-added modeling
- ... that value-added modeling rates teacher performance by comparing prior and current year student test scores and can be used to award bonuses to top performers and fire those with the lowest ratings? Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 14:37, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
Perhaps ALT 1:that value-added modelling rates teacher performance by comparing prior and current year student test scores? Plus "modeling" is spelled wrong.Thelmadatter (talk) 15:54, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
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- The article discusses its use for teacher retention and the main source says "Though the value-added method is often used to help educators improve their classroom teaching, it has also been a factor in deciding who receives bonuses, how much they are and even who gets fired." The article will be moved to reflect the correct spelling. Alansohn (talk) 17:14, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
Franz von Hipper
- ... that German Admiral Franz von Hipper was vilified as a "baby-killer" in the British press during World War I? 5x expanded by Parsecboy (talk). Self nom at 12:48, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
Escape of the Provisional Revolutionary Government
- ... that during the Vietnam War the South Vietnamese Army came close to "annihilating or capturing" the Vietcong leadership but was prevented from doing so by General Hoàng Văn Thái and his successful plan for the escape of the Provisional Revolutionary Government? 5x expanded and new article by Esemono (talk). Self nom at 12:48, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
East River Road Historic District
- ... that the Gothic Revival "Wedding Cake House" (pictured) in Grosse Ile's East River Road Historic District was built over 150 years ago and has never been remodeled? Created by Andrew Jameson (talk). Nominated by Andrew Jameson (talk) at 10:43, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
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- For convenience, direct link to cite: Grosse Ile Historical Society (2007), Grosse Ile, Arcadia Publishing, p. 82-83, ISBN 0738550507, http://books.google.com/books?id=KYoqtQ9VXX4C&q=remodeled&f=false#v=snippet&q=%22built%20in%201859%22&f=false Andrew Jameson (talk) 10:50, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
Aktio-Preveza Undersea Tunnel
- ... that the Aktio-Preveza Undersea Tunnel is the first and so far only undersea tunnel in Greece? Created by Athenean (talk). Nominated by Athenean (talk) at 07:52, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
Labia minor
- ... that Labia minor is chocolate-brown and up to 7 mm long, including the pincer?
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Created by Stemonitis (talk). Self nom at 07:03, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
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- Haha, I think the hook can be improved though:
- ALT1 ... that Labia minor are chocolate-brown, up to 7 mm long, and equipped with pincers? Smartse (talk) 10:39, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
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Brilliant. Both hooks are approved - love the suggestive, but not so suggestive picture. Clamshell Deathtrap (talk) 11:00, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
- In the alt hook, I've replaced "have" with "equipped with"; see parallelism (grammar). Nyttend (talk) 21:38, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
- Fantastic! :) Is this an example of labia dentata? -- L'ecrivant (talk) 22:41, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
- I don't think it is inaccurate to use "have" instead of "equipped with" and it makes the hook a lot more interesting. I'd suggest changing it back Smartse (talk) 15:57, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
- In the alt hook, I've replaced "have" with "equipped with"; see parallelism (grammar). Nyttend (talk) 21:38, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
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Harris Dental Museum
- ... that the Harris Dental Museum (pictured) in Bainbridge, Ohio preserves the first dental school in the United States? Created by Nyttend (talk). Nominated by Nyttend (talk) at 04:42, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
Jacob Mayer
- ... that Jacob Mayer resigned in 1876 from his position as rabbi of Baltimore's Har Sinai Congregation amid charges that he had been a convert to Christianity who worked as a missionary in Africa? Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 02:25, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on August 31
Iximche
- ... that at the time of the Spanish Conquest, the Kaqchikel Maya city of Iximche was the second most important city in the Guatemalan Highlands? 5x expanded by Simon Burchell (talk). Self nom at 08:28, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
Kelli Scarr
- ... that Kelli Scarr completed a challenge with Moby by National Public Radio to write and perform a song in less than two days? Created/expanded by Seraphimblade (talk). Self nom at 07:59, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
Julius Curry
- ... that Michigan strong safety Julius Curry in 2006 formed Curry Racing, the first NASCAR racing team with sole minority ownership? Created by Cbl62 (talk). Self nom at 05:52, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
Lucas Duda
- ... that Lucas Duda was pulled from his professional baseball debut in the eighth inning due to hamstring cramps, which he thought were the result of dehydration brought on by his flight to the game? Created by Yankees10 (talk), Brewcrewer (talk). Nominated by Brewcrewer (talk) at 01:59, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
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- Alt: ... that Lucas Duda faced Tommy Hanson in his professional baseball debut, whom he previously played against in high school?--brewcrewer (yada, yada) 02:01, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
Minor league baseball is professional baseball so shouldn't the hook be reworded "...in his Major League Baseball debut..."? --Brian Halvorsen (talk) 20:14, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
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- fine, I'll rephrase both hooks below:
- ... that Lucas Duda was pulled from his Major League Baseball debut in the eighth inning due to hamstring cramps, which he thought were the result of dehydration brought on by his flight to the game? >Created by Yankees10 (talk), Brewcrewer (talk). Nominated by--brewcrewer (yada, yada) 01:44, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
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- Alt: ... that Lucas Duda faced Tommy Hanson in his Major League Baseball debut, whom he previously played against in high school?--brewcrewer (yada, yada) 01:44, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
Both hooks check out. I like the alt hook better, but that's just my opinion. Very good job. --Brian Halvorsen (talk) 03:45, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
Domenico Annibali
- ... that the Italian castrato Domenico Annibali (pictured) made a sensational debut at the Royal Opera House in London in the title role of Handel's opera Poro? Created by 4meter4 (talk). Nominated by Gerda Arendt (talk) at 22:04, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
Adelaide Borghi-Mamo
- ... that the operatic mezzo-soprano Adelaide Borghi-Mamo (pictured) sang the part of Azucena in the French premiere of Verdi's Il trovatore at the Théâtre-Italien in Paris in 1854? Created by 4meter4 (talk). Nominated by Gerda Arendt (talk) at 21:48, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
French ironclad Océan
- ... that the French ironclad Océan was assigned to the Northern Squadron that attempted to blockade Prussian ports on the Baltic Sea during the Franco-Prussian War until recalled on 16 September 1870? 5x expanded by Sturmvogel 66 (talk). Nominated by Sturmvogel 66 (talk) at 18:31, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
French ironclad Suffren
- ... that the French ironclad Suffren was assigned to the international squadron gathered at Ragusa in 1880 to force the Ottoman Empire to carry out its obligations under the Treaty of Berlin and turn over the town of Ulcinj to Montenegro? 5x expanded by Sturmvogel 66 (talk). Nominated by Sturmvogel 66 (talk) at 18:24, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
Reinert Torgeirson
- ... that Reinert Torgeirson managed the publishing house of the Norwegian Labour Party until he changed party to Communist? Created by Geschichte (talk). Self nom at 08:24, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
Children of the Stars
- ... that Children of the Stars is a documentary about the Beijing Stars and Rain School, the first non-governmental educational organization in China dedicated to serving children with autism, which was founded in 1993?
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Created by Ling.Nut (talk). Self nom at 07:14, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
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- It occurs to me that this may be a bit better:"... that Children of the Stars is a documentary about the Beijing Stars and Rain School, founded in 1993 as the first non-governmental educational organization in China dedicated to serving children with autism?" • Ling.Nut 07:39, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
Swastika (Germanic Iron Age)
- ... that historian Hilda Ellis Davidson theorizes that the Swastika symbol was used by Norsemen to represent Mjolnir? Created by Dbachmann (talk). Nominated by Secret Saturdays (talk) at 01:22, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
Mont Pleasant, Schenectady, New York
- ... that Schenectady, New York's Mont Pleasant neighborhood had a residential vacancy rate of 28% in 2009, the third highest in the US state of New York? Created by Camelbinky (talk). Self nom at 23:54, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
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Good to go.--brewcrewer (yada, yada) 02:45, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
Pensacola and Atlantic Railroad
- ... that in 1881, the Florida Legislature granted 2.8 million acres of public land, one-fifteenth of the area of the state, to the Pensacola and Atlantic Railroad to encourage the building of a rail line that ended the Florida Panhandle's isolation from the rest of the state? Created by User:Textorus (talk). Self nom at 22:37, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
- A little more concise:
... that in 1881, Florida granted 2.8 million acres of public land to the Pensacola and Atlantic Railroad to build a rail line that ended the Panhandle's isolation from the rest of the state? Textorus (talk) 07:23, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
COSMIC cancer database
- ... that the COSMIC cancer database has documented somatic mutations from over half a million tumour samples? Created by Abergabe (talk). Nominated by Rockpocket (talk) at 17:27, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
1952 Winter Olympics
- ... that the bobsleigh run at the 1952 Winter Olympics was made entirely of snow? 5x expanded by H1nkles (talk). Nominated by H1nkles (talk) at 16:05, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
Abaz Kupi
- ... that the antifascist and freedom fighter Abaz Kupi was the founder of the Legality Movement, which aimed to return Zog of Albania back to his throne? Created by Aigest (talk). Nominated by Sulmues (talk) at 15:08, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
Podgorica–Shkodër railway
- ... that the Podgorica–Shkodër railway, built in 1985, was the first international railway of Albania? Created by Your Über Monkey (talk). Nominated by Sulmues (talk) at 13:33, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
Bajzë Rail Station
- ... that the Bajzë Rail Station was completely cleaned up in 2003 from toxic chemicals dumped in 1991-92? Created by Your Über Monkey (talk). Nominated by Sulmues (talk) at 13:25, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
USCGC Point Arden (WPB-82309)
- ... that the USCGC Point Arden, an 82-foot USCG Point class cutter originally designated as WPB-82301, later acquired the name Point Caution when the Coast Guard started naming all cutters longer than 65 feet? Created by Cuprum17 (talk). Nominated by MC10 (talk) at 01:47, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
Edward A. Gisburne
- ... that, despite losing a leg in his first term of service, Edward A. Gisburne completed two more war-time stints with the United States Navy? 5x expanded by Jwillbur (talk). Self nom at 01:24, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
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Date is verified, but the article seems to be a bit short of 5x+ expansion. The last pre-expansion version[4] measures to about 1100 characters of prose, whereas the current version measures to about 4950 characters of prose. It seems that you are about 500 characters short of 5x+ expansion. Maybe some-one else could re-check the character count, but if you could expand the article by around an extra 500 characters in the next 2-3 days, that would certainly solve the length problem. Nsk92 (talk) 17:05, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
- Hmm, I'm using the prosesize script which gives quite different numbers. Anyways, I added about 1000 characters so it should meet the requirement whichever tool you use. — jwillbur 22:10, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
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- OK, thanks. I used this tool[5] for computing the prose-length; in any event the prose length is certainly OK now. There is still one minor issue with verification of the hook fact. The second term of service after the leg amputation mentioned in the hook is the one during WWII. It is mentioned in the first paragraph of the section "World War II and later years". However, there needs to be an extra footnoted ref in that paragraph. At the moment the only in-line ref there occurs at the end of that paragraph, after the sentence about Gisburne's son being killed in the war. I'd like to see an extra in-line ref earlier in the paragraph as well, where the service of Edward Gisburne is mentioned. Nsk92 (talk) 05:47, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
Leymah Gbowee
- ... that Leymah Gbowee organized a peace movement that ended the Second Liberian Civil War and led to the election of Ellen Johnson Sirleaf, the first female president in Africa? 5x expanded by USchick (talk). Self nom at 00:40, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
George Alexander Parks
- ... that George Alexander Parks (pictured) was appointed Governor of Alaska Territory after an impressive stint as a tour guide? 5x expanded by Allen3 (talk). Self nom at 22:50, 31 August 2010 (UTC)
- Comment: An example of what can happen after your boss assigns you to escort a group of dignitaries. --Allen3 talk 22:51, 31 August 2010 (UTC)
Hipposandal
- ... that the hipposandal was a metal shoe laced to horse hoofs in Celto-Roman countries? Created/expanded by Rama (talk). Nominated by Rama (talk) at 22:29, 31 August 2010 (UTC)
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Article contains only 651 characters of readable prose. Minimum required is 1500. --Allen3 talk 00:29, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
Ancient Church Orders
- ... that Ancient Church Orders is a genre of early Christian literature which has the aim to offer authoritative prescriptions on matters of moral conduct, liturgy and church organization? Created by A ntv (talk). Self nom at 21:44, 31 August 2010 (UTC)
X-Men: First Class (film project)
- ... that the planned Marvel Comics superhero film, X-Men: First Class is intended to take place during the 1960s and will parallel the history of Martin Luther King, Jr. and Malcolm X? Created by Jhenderson777 (talk), -5- (talk). Nominated by TriiipleThreat (talk) at 20:27, 31 August 2010 (UTC)
Plön Castle
- ... that in 1933 Plön Castle (pictured) in Plön, in the north German state of Schleswig-Holstein, was used as an elite Nazi school that bore the name of SA commander Ernst Röhm until he was assassinated? 5x expanded by Bermicourt (talk). Self nom at 20:13, 31 August 2010 (UTC)
St Michael's Church, Cowthorpe
- ... that the tower of St Michael's Church, Cowthorpe, North Yorkshire, (pictured) has been described as "more like a castle fortification than a religious symbol" and its arch as "more suited to a cathedral than a small country church"? Created by Peter I. Vardy (talk). Self nom at 19:26, 31 August 2010 (UTC)
Lords of Finance
- ... that Lords of Finance by Liaquat Ahamed won the 2010 Pulitzer Prize in history? Created by Remember (talk). Nominated by Remember (talk) at 18:16, 31 August 2010 (UTC)
- Alternative hook - ... that the only book that Fed Chairment Ben Bernanke recommended to understand the financial crisis of 2007–2010 was the Pulitzer Prize winning Lords of Finance by Liaquat Ahamed? Remember (talk) 12:55, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
Walter Powell (politician)
- ... that Walter Powell ended his term as MP for Malmesbury when he vanished over the English Channel in a hot air balloon? Created by Motmit (talk). Self nom at 18:07, 31 August 2010 (UTC)
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Length, references and style all OK. Shadygrove2007 (talk) 12:35, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
- I've changed balloon > hot air balloon Smartse (talk) 17:22, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
Jacob Bigeleisen
- ... that Manhattan Project scientist Jacob Bigeleisen became an advocate for nuclear disarmament, saying that "having lived through that time, that any further use of nuclear weapons is out of the question"? Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 17:27, 31 August 2010 (UTC)
Qemal Butka
... that architect Qemal Butka was actively a philatelist while being the mayor of Tirana? Created by Aigest (talk). Nominated by Sulmues (talk) at 16:41, 31 August 2010 (UTC)
Jersey Circus
- ... that Jersey Circus is a webcomic mashup of images from The Family Circus newspaper comic strip and dialogue from MTV's Jersey Shore? Created by Dravecky (talk). Self nom at 12:01, 31 August 2010 (UTC)
James Pierrepont Greaves
- ... that the English educational reformer James Pierrepont Greaves (1777-1842) described himself as a "sacred socialist" and advocated vegetarianism, water drinking, hydrotherapy and celibacy? Created by Shadygrove2007 (talk). Self nom at 11:22, 31 August 2010 (UTC)
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- ALT1 (shorter): ... that "sacred socialist" James Pierrepont Greaves (1777-1842) was an advocate of vegetarianism, water drinking, hydrotherapy and celibacy? Shadygrove2007 (talk) 16:41, 31 August 2010 (UTC)
¿Por Qué Te Tengo Que Olvidar?
- ... that Puerto Rican-American singer José Feliciano was awarded his sixth Grammy Award for his performance of the song "¿Por Qué Te Tengo Que Olvidar?" Created by Jaespinoza (talk) 07:26, 31 August 2010 (UTC). Self nom at 07:25, 31 August 2010 (UTC)
Black-spotted whipray, brown whipray
- ... that the black-spotted whipray (pictured) was at first thought to be the same as the brown whipray, which itself was at first thought to be the same as the honeycomb stingray? Created by Yzx (talk). Self nom at 06:43, 31 August 2010 (UTC)
William W. Evans
- ... that Lacrosse Hall of Fame inductee William "Moon" Evans, who twice led the United States in scoring, saw action in the Battle of Okinawa and the Battle of Peleliu? Created by Strikehold (talk). Nominated by Strikehold (talk) at 05:47, 31 August 2010 (UTC)
Verified. Clamshell Deathtrap (talk) 09:47, 31 August 2010 (UTC)
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- Comment: I think it would be nice to specify which nation, not just have "the nation". --Demiurge1000 (talk) 17:54, 31 August 2010 (UTC)
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- Very good idea. I've changed it - hopefully that's okay with Strikehold. Clamshell Deathtrap (talk) 01:31, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
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Pete Ladygo
- ... that guard Pete Ladygo went to Canada to play football for the Ottawa Rough Riders rather than accept a trade to the Detroit Lions? Created by Strikehold (talk). Nominated by Strikehold (talk) at 04:19, 31 August 2010 (UTC)
1689 Boston revolt
- ... that the 1689 Boston revolt resulted in the dissolution of the Dominion of New England?
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- ALT1:... that Puritan Bostonians overthrew their governor, loyal to the Catholic James II of England during the 1689 Boston revolt?
Created by DCI2026 (talk). Self nom at 04:19, 31 August 2010 (UTC)
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The last line of the article, which supports that the Dominion of New England was dissolved, is not cited. ALT 1 is OK. Thelmadatter (talk) 16:03, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
George V. Chalmers
- that quarterback George "Shorty" Chalmers (pictured) was considered a triple threat man, and alongside Boze Berger, "one of the most dangerous pass–catch combinations in Maryland history"? Created/expanded by Strikehold (talk). Nominated by Strikehold (talk) at 03:30, 31 August 2010 (UTC)
Kannagawa Hydropower Plant
- ... that when completed, the Kannagawa Hydropower Plant in Japan will be the largest pumped-storage power station in the world? Created/self-nom by --NortyNort (Holla) 03:10, 31 August 2010 (UTC) 16:13, 28 August 2010 (UTC)
Mill Creek (Lake Erie)
- ... that after the Mill Creek flooded Erie Pennsylvania in 1915, it was diverted to a tube (pictured) that is large enough for a pickup truck to drive through? Created by Niagara (talk). Self nom at 02:26, 31 August 2010 (UTC)
Ghiyasu'd-Din Naqqah
- ... that both a Persian envoy to the Ming China of ca. 1420 and his Chinese opposite number left important historical records about their journeys? Created by Vmenkov (talk). Nominated by Vmenkov (talk) at 01:42, 31 August 2010 (UTC)
- Comment: I have no idea whether Ghiyasu'd-Din Naqqah's hometown was within the borders of today's Iran (rather than say, Afghanistan or Uzbekistan), but Shakh Rukh's embassy is described by Anglo-American academics (e.g., Timothy Brook) as "Persian". Contribution from anyone with the knowledge of the language and access to the primary source would be appreciated, at least for spelling the person's name in the original script! -- Vmenkov (talk) 01:42, 31 August 2010 (UTC)
Older nominations
Articles created/expanded on August 30
Ignace Poretsky
- ... that Soviet spy Ignace Poretsky was assassinated shortly after he defected? Created by Aboudaqn (talk). Nominated by Piotrus (talk) at 18:57, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
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Generally OK, but there are a few issues with WP:LEAD compliance: The lead's assertion that it was the NKVD who assassinated him is the obvious assumption, but it is not referenced and not supported by the body of the article, where we only learn that he was found dead on a road, with no information about who killed him. The years in the lead should not be wikilinked. "Great Illegals", also in the lead, is unreferenced and needs explanation: it's not clear what made him either great or illegal. – Two other nitpicks that do not preclude a DYK: Wikimapia is not a reliable source, and footnotes 2 and 9 have formatting issues. Sandstein 07:53, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
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- Added a citation for the NKVD assassins, delinked the dates, referenced the "Great Illegals" and fixed footnote 2 and 9 -- Esemono (talk) 10:31, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
Terra sigillata
- ... that the "big kiln" at La Graufesenque in Roman Gaul could fire up to 40,000 terra sigillata vessels (example pictured) at a time? 5x expanded by AgTigress (talk). Nominated by Johnbod (talk) at 15:37, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
Most thorough! I've left a few comments on the article talk page, but these are aimed more at getting the article to GA and do not prevent the article from appearing in DYK. Sandstein 08:11, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
Bavi Edna Rivera
- ... that The Right Reverend Bavi Edna Rivera is the first Hispanic woman bishop and the 12th woman bishop in the Episcopal Church? Created by Marine 69-71 (talk). Nominated by PFHLai (talk) at 05:32, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
1946 National League tie-breaker series
- ... that the 1946 National League tie-breaker series was the first ever tiebreaker for the playoffs in Major League Baseball history? Created by Wizardman Operation Big Bear. Self nom at 04:37, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
Neosho class monitor
- ... that the Neosho-class monitor USS Osage grounded on a sandbar near Helena, Arkansas in May 1863 and could not be refloated until the end of November? 5x expanded by Sturmvogel 66 (talk). Nominated by Sturmvogel 66 (talk) at 17:26, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
Inez Haynes Irwin
- ... that American feminist Inez Haynes Irwin (pictured) described herself as "the most timid of created beings"?
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- ALT1:... that American feminist author and journalist Inez Haynes Irwin (pictured) estimated that between 500,000 and 750,000 women were killed in World War I?
5x expanded by Bruce1ee (talk). Self nom at 08:05, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
John A. Kirkwood
- ... that Sergeant John A. Kirkwood received the Medal of Honor for his actions during the Battle of Slim Buttes? Created by Jwillbur (talk). Self nom at 22:02, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
Senostoma
- ... that members of Senostoma must kill their hosts when ready to emerge?
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5x expanded by Maedin (talk). Self nom at 07:52, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
Groom kidnapping
- ... that in 2009, there were 1,224 reports of Groom kidnapping in Bihar?
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- ALT1:... that in parts of Bihar and eastern Uttar Pradesh, the bride's family would engage in Groom kidnapping to avoid paying dowry?
- ALT2:... that the film Antardwand was inspired by a friend having to go through with groom kidnapping?
Created by Ekabhishek (talk). Nominated by Secret Saturdays (talk) at 01:46, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
Ivan Gannibal
- ... that for his efforts in founding the Ukrainian city of Kherson, Russian General Ivan Gannibal (pictured) received the Orders of St. Vladimir and St. Alexander Nevsky, a jewel-encrusted snuffbox decorated with a portrait of Empress Catherine II, and a 20,000 desiatina estate? Created/expanded by Y (talk). Self nom at 21:25, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
let's try this again, shorter this time at 192 characters -- Y not? 21:31, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
- ALT1... that for building the Ukrainian city of Kherson, Russian General Ivan Gannibal (pictured) received the two orders of chivalry, a jewel-encrusted snuffbox with a portrait of Empress Catherine II, and a 20,000 desiatina estate?
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- Better, but still too long. According to this character count tool[7], this hook is still 214 characters long (that's without counting the word '(pictured)'; with the word '(pictured)' it is 225 characters). I am not sure how you got 192; when the length of the hook is counted, every character, including spaces and punctuation is included, starting with 'that' and ending with '?'. Nsk92 (talk) 00:52, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
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- dammit, I used Word and inadvertently looked at the wrong line. I've got it down to 199. Sorry, I'm rusty, I haven't had a DYK in years.
ALT2 ... that for building the Ukrainian city of Kherson, Empress Catherine II gave Russian General Ivan Gannibal (pictured) two orders of chivalry, a jewel-encrusted snuff box, and a 20,000 desiatina estate?
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OK, thanks. ALT2 hook verified. Date and article length verified, hook length OK, hook fact verified (the hook fact ref is in Russian, but I checked that it does indeed support the hook fact). I have removed the stub tag from the article, since DYK articles are not supposed to be marked as stubs. Nsk92 (talk) 01:34, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
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825th Tank Destroyer Battalion
- ... that during the Battle of the Bulge, a gun crew of the American 825th Tank Destroyer Battalion knocked out a Tiger II tank by making it reverse into a house? Created by Shimgray (talk). Self nom at 13:07, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
Bombing of Singapore (1944–1945)
- ... that United States Army Air Forces B-29 Superfortress bombers attacked targets in and near Singapore on eleven occasions between November 1944 and March 1945?
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- ALT1:... that the air raids on Singapore conducted by by United States Army Air Forces B-29 Superfortress bombers during World War II were the longest daylight bombing operations up to that time?
Created by Nick-D (talk). Self nom at 03:23, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
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Good to go for both. AGF for the offline sources.--White Shadows Your guess is as good as mine 10:53, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
Anthony Roberts (basketball)
- ... that Anthony Roberts is the only other NCAA Division I men's basketball player besides Pete Maravich to score 60+ points in two or more games? Created by Jrcla2 (talk). Self nom at 01:51, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
White Boar
- ... that finding a silver badge symbolising a White Boar means the battle where Richard III died was not where it was believed to be? Created by Johnbod (talk). Nominated by Victuallers (talk) at 20:57, 31 August 2010 (UTC)
- ALT1:... that finding a silver livery badge with a White Boar means the battle where Richard III died was not where it was believed to be?
- which is a bit of a hyperbole, as a couple of dozen cannonballs and other stuff helped too. Or:
- ALT2:... that finding a silver livery badge of a White Boar in 2009 helped to move the site of the Battle of Bosworth where Richard III died? Johnbod (talk) 00:54, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
Åre Old Church
- ... that Åre Old Church, (pictured) remains the only stone church in the Scandinavian Mountains from the Middle Ages? Created by Philaweb (talk). Self nom at 19:10, 31 August 2010 (UTC)
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- Are there wooden ones? Victuallers (talk) 20:57, 31 August 2010 (UTC)
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- Yes, they are called stave churches and there are still some left Talk/♥фĩłдωəß♥\Work 21:13, 31 August 2010 (UTC)
- I didn't think they were that old...impressive So
Victuallers (talk) 16:31, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
Agustarello Affré
- ... that soprano Nellie Melba and tenor Agustarello Affré made their debut together at the Paris Opéra in 1890 as Lucia and Edgardo in Donizetti's Lucia di Lammermoor? Created by 4meter4 (talk). Nominated by Gerda Arendt (talk) at 14:44, 31 August 2010 (UTC)
Ada Adini
- ... that soprano Ada Adini, a singer of Verdi's Gilda and Leonora, appeared as Brünnhilde in the Italian premiere of Wagner's Die Walküre at La Scala in 1893? Created by 4meter4 (talk). Nominated by Gerda Arendt (talk) at 14:16, 31 August 2010 (UTC)
St Mary's Church, South Cowton
- ... that Sir Richard Conyers, who built St Mary's Church, South Cowton, (pictured) between 1450 and 1470, also built South Cowton Castle nearby, but destroyed the village of South Cowton? Created by Peter I. Vardy (talk). Self nom at 10:02, 31 August 2010 (UTC)
Reger-Chor
- ... that the international Reger-Chor celebrated 25 years, singing music of Bach, Van Nuffel, Ryelandt, and Reger's Hebbel-Requiem in Wiesbaden and Bruges? Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self nom at 06:21, 31 August 2010 (UTC)
Treaty of Bonn
- ... that the Treaty of Bonn (7 November 921) was signed on a ship in the middle of the Rhine, the border between kingdoms of the two signatories, Charles the Simple and Henry the Fowler? 5x expanded by Srnec (talk). Nominated by Srnec (talk) at 02:55, 31 August 2010 (UTC)
French ironclad Marengo
- ... that the French ironclad Marengo was on her sea trials in July 1870 when the Franco-Prussian War began and was immediately placed in reserve; she was not commissioned until after the war was over? 5x expanded by Sturmvogel 66 (talk). Nominated by Sturmvogel 66 (talk) at 23:35, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
Viktor Nemkov
- ... that Viktor Nemkov is an M-1 Global veteran who was approached by World Wrestling Entertainment to become a professional wrestler? Created by Paralympiakos (talk). Nominated by Paralympiakos (talk) at 22:44, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
Francisco Drinaldo
- ... that Francisco Drinaldo, better known as Massaranduba, is a Brazilian Kickboxing champion with an undefeated professional mixed martial arts record? Created by Paralympiakos (talk). Self nom at 22:38, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
Hamilton H-47
- ... that during 1930, Isthmian Airways used Hamilton H-47 floatplanes for their service linking the Atlantic to the Pacific (Cristóbal to Balboa) in the Panama Canal Zone, claiming the 30-minute flight as the "fastest transcontinental service in North America". 5x expanded by RuthAS (talk). Nominated by TSRL (talk) at 20:43, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
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- ALT1... that Hamilton H-47 floatplanes provided the "fastest transcontinental service in North America" in 1930, the 30-minute flight across the Panama Canal Zone? Le Deluge (talk) 10:11, 31 August 2010 (UTC)
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- ALT2... that according to Isthmian Airways, their 1930s Hamilton H-47 floatplanes provided "the fastest transcontinental service in North America", a 30-minute flight across the Panama Canal Zone?TSRL (talk) 18:49, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
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David Einhorn (rabbi), Har Sinai Congregation
- ... that Rabbi David Einhorn (pictured) of Har Sinai Congregation in Baltimore sermonized in 1861 in opposition to slavery and had to flee to Philadelphia after a mob sought to tar and feather him for his views? 5x expanded by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 20:09, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
Princess Sophie of Saxe-Weimar-Eisenach (1888-1913)
- ... that suicide-victim Princess Sophie of Saxe-Weimar-Eisenach is believed to have been the first royal woman cremated? Created by Ruby2010 (talk). Self nom at 17:41, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
HMS Chatham (1812)
- ... that HMS Chatham was laid down at Flushing, in Holland, and launched at Woolwich, in England? Created by Benea (talk). Self nom at 17:14, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
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New enough, long enough, hook is referenced in article, interesting hook (it had me thinking for a few seconds...) Offline references AGF --Demiurge1000 (talk) 17:24, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
George Garrard
- ... that artist George Garrard (1760-1826) made plaster models of farm animals, and successfully lobbied Parliament to introduce legislation to protect the copyright of British model-makers? Created by Shadygrove2007 (talk). Self nom at 15:52, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
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- (shorter alt)... that in 1798 artist George Garrard successfully lobbied Parliament to allow the copyright of British models?
- ALT1 (better - avoids ambiguity): ... that, in 1798, artist George Garrard successfully lobbied Parliament to introduce copyright protection for British model-makers?
- ALT2 (better still): "... that, in 1798, artist George Garrard successfully campaigned to introduce the first copyright protection for model-makers in Britain?"
Safet Butka
- ... that Albanian nationalist Safet Butka killed himself because in Albania the war against fascism was degenerating into a civil war? Created by Aigest (talk). Nominated by Sulmues (talk) at 14:47, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
Isaac and Miria
- ... that Isaac Dian and Miria Harvent, characters of the Baccano! light novel and anime series, try to "steal time" by taking watches and attempt to bar entry by taking an entrance?
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- ALT1:... that Isaac Dian and Miria Harvent, characters of the Baccano! light novel and anime series, forget to buy their friend a present and give a little boy as a gift instead?
Created by Itzjustdrama (talk). Self nom at 14:45, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
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- Neither suggestion here has any real-world context. Simply stating that they're characters in a novel is not enough. DS (talk) 14:05, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
- I didn't know that could be a problem. How about *ALT 2: ... that Isaac Dian and Miria Harvent are characters of the Baccano! light novels and anime, set in the Prohibition-era United States, but also appear in the Durarara!! anime, set in modern Tokyo? 'Course, I don't know if that's very interesting ~Itzjustdrama ? C 14:22, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
- That's actually better, yes. DS (talk) 23:04, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
- No tick mark for alt two? ;P ~Itzjustdrama does not equal a Drama Llama 16:38, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
John Franklin Alexander Strong
- ... that according to U.S. Senator Ernest Gruening, Alaska Territorial Governor J. F. A. Strong (pictured) was not reappointed to the post because he was not a United States citizen? 5x expanded by Allen3 (talk). Self nom at 13:05, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
Danish Golden Age
- ... that the 19th-century Danish Golden Age did not just cover painting (example pictured) but a range of other cultural developments in architecture, sculpture, music and literature?
Alt .. that the 19th-century Danish Golden Age did not just cover painting (example pictured) but also architecture, sculpture, music and literature? 5x expanded by Ipigott (talk). Nominated by Elekhh (talk) at 12:53, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
Haverfordwest election, 1571
- ... that Alban Stepneth lost the Haverfordwest election, 1571, despite polling more votes than his opponent John Garnons? Created by Claritas (talk). Nominated by Claritas (talk) at 12:42, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
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AGF as off-line reference Francium12 15:00, 31 August 2010 (UTC)
Battle of Suoi Chau Pha
- ... that Alexander Sutherland, an Australian soldier, was personally recommended for the US Medal of Honor by General William Westmoreland following the Battle of Suoi Chau Pha on 6 August 1967, only to later receive a lesser Australian award? Created by Anotherclown (talk). Self nom at 12:12, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
Azotobacter
- ... that Azotobacter species (pictured) are used in the production of ice cream and instant puddings?
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- Comment: See section "applications" and ref. 61. Materialscientist (talk) 11:43, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
5x expanded by Materialscientist (talk). Nominated by Materialscientist (talk) at 11:43, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
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I've reviewed this and everything is fine but think we need to add "alginic acid from" in between that and Azobacter in the hook since the bacteria themselves aren't used in the puddings and ice creams. Smartse (talk) 14:07, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
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- Nah - I think it's fine as is, perfectly accurate and no need to dilute the hook with extra words. You can equally say that a saw is used in the production of wooden objects, or whatever. Le Deluge (talk) 18:45, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
- Adding alginic acid would make the hook more accurate but less intriguing, thus fewer people would be interested to read the article. I think it is one of those cases when the hook doesn't need to describe all details. Materialscientist (talk) 21:40, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
- Nah - I think it's fine as is, perfectly accurate and no need to dilute the hook with extra words. You can equally say that a saw is used in the production of wooden objects, or whatever. Le Deluge (talk) 18:45, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
Rice production in Romania
- ... that Romania is the sixth largest producer of rice in the European Union? Created by Bine Mai (talk). Self nom at 09:16, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
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The reference for the claim in the hook is to a title facility ([8]), is there another source that could be used to reference this? Smartse (talk) 14:18, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
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- The reference still points to the same site and a title facility can't be used as a reference. I've had a look for another source that could be used but haven't had any joy. Smartse (talk) 09:48, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
- ALT1 ... that in 2009 Romania cultivated around 12,900 hectares (32,000 acres) of rice fields ranking third in the European Union?
1957 Maryland Terrapins football team
- ... that the 1957 Maryland Terrapins football season included a game attended by Queen Elizabeth II? Created by Strikehold (talk). Nominated by Strikehold (talk) at 05:11, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
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Reference checks out fine Francium12 14:52, 31 August 2010 (UTC)
Bob Topp
- ... that Bob Topp helped the New York Giants defeat the Cleveland Browns in 1956 by intercepting radio signals used to relay plays onto the field from the Browns' bench? Created by Cbl62 (talk). Self nom at 02:23, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
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Good to go Francium12 22:30, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
Spot-fixing
- ... that a 1995 spot-fixing scandal was thwarted by a Premiership footballer's underhit pass? Created by Francium12 (talk). Nominated by Francium12 (talk) at 01:55, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
Walter Eli Clark
- ... that Alaska Territorial Governor Walter Eli Clark (pictured) was interested in rose cultivation and President of the American Rose Society? 5x expanded by Allen3 (talk). Self nom at 00:16, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
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Can you provide a source which says he was President? Francium12 22:51, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
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- Redundant reference has been added to save reviewer from having to look to the end of a two sentence block that is supported by a single source. --Allen3 talk 23:04, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
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Stay civil :-) Sometimes it is easy to miss a reference when you're reviewing Francium12 14:48, 31 August 2010 (UTC)
List of NME number-one singles from the 1970s
- ... that the NME chart placed Sex Pistols' "God Save the Queen" at number one even though the song was banned by some major retailers? Created by Rambo's Revenge (talk). Self nom at 00:08, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
Just changed the link to the Sex Pistols song rather than the national anthem :-D Francium12 18:24, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on August 29
Shirlee Emmons
- ... that operatic soprano Shirlee Emmons won an Obie Award for her portrayal of Susan B. Anthony in the 1956 Off-Broadway revival of Virgil Thomson's The Mother of Us All? Created by 4meter4 (talk). Self nom at 15:59, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
St. Luke's Hospital, Rathgar
- ... that St. Luke's Hospital in Rathgar, Ireland was awarded an RIAI Gold Medal for architecture? Created by Flameoak (talk). Nominated by Chzz (talk) at 15:23, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
- Note, this was created through AFC 29-Aug, and this nom is slightly over 5 days old, but please give it consideration; as the author is a brand-new user, I would appreciate this being given a fair chance; it is my own fault it was not submitted earlier, due to my absence for a few days. Chzz ► 15:23, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
Angiomyolipoma
- ... that angiomyolipoma are the most common benign tumour of the kidney and are composed of blood vessels, smooth muscle cells and fat cells? 5x expanded by Colin (talk). Nominated by Colin (talk) at 12:28, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
K2K experiment
- ... that the K2K experiment was the first neutrino experiment to directly measure neutrino oscillations using a fully-controlled source of neutrinos (as opposed to cosmic sources)? Created by Strait (talk) and expanded by Headbomb (talk). Nominated by Headbomb (talk) at 10:52, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
Your Coffee Cups
- ... that Your Coffee Cups is the second sexually-themed coffee house to open in the San Francisco Bay Area of the US state of California? Created by QwerpQwertus (talk). Nominated by QwerpQwertus (talk) at 02:37, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
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- :*Note: If you comment or leave a tick, I'd appreciate it if you'd leave me a note since I can't access this page. Thanks! ℳono 02:37, 3 September 2010 (UTC) on behalf of QwerpQwertus (talk | contribs)
Adelaide Malanotte
- ... that operatic contralto Adelaide Malanotte (pictured) created the title role of Gioachino Rossini's Tancredi at La Fenice in 1813? Created by 4meter4 (talk). Nominated by Gerda Arendt (talk) at 21:03, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
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- (alt.hook)... that Gioachino Rossini's opera Tancredi premiered in 1813 at Teatro La Fenice in Venice with Adelaide Malanotte (pictured) performing in the title role? --PFHLai (talk) 06:20, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
Scouter's Training Award
- ... that there are five different ways to earn the Scouter's Training Award? Created by Ericalford (talk). Nominated by Rlevse (talk) at 01:34, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
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- Comment: Four of five, or perhaps all five, of the citations justifying the hook statement, are perhaps self-published sources? --Demiurge1000 (talk) 01:58, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
- None of the citations are self-published. Five are sourced from organization's website. Sixth is from individual who did retitle on this subject. Ericalford (talk) 20:20, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
- Further comment: Also, about 90% of the prose content of the article appears to be directly copy and pasted FROM those sources.... --Demiurge1000 (talk) 02:01, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
- There aren't a lot of sources on this topic. I'll contact the creator about the copy issue. — Rlevse • Talk • 19:52, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
- Only content directly copied were list of requirments for earning the award. As these are requirement, I did not see how they could be deviated from or changed. Ericalford (talk) 20:20, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
- Well, I still think it would be more appropriate if the hook were a fact that does not come directly from the (large) part of the article that is copied and pasted from the organization's own website. But maybe others view it differently. --Demiurge1000 (talk) 20:46, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
- Only content directly copied were list of requirments for earning the award. As these are requirement, I did not see how they could be deviated from or changed. Ericalford (talk) 20:20, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
- looks good to me. Dincher (talk) 23:16, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
Aboriginal Memorial
- ... that the Aboriginal Memorial contains 200 coffins, but not a single dead person? Created by Hamiltonstone (talk). Self nom at 00:48, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
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Good to go.Thelmadatter (talk) 15:53, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
Sverre Krogh (Nazi)
- ... that Sverre Krogh, a delegate at the Second Comintern Congress, many years later worked as an informer for the Nazi Sicherheitspolizei? Created by Geschichte (talk). Self nom at 19:27, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
al-Mabda', Iraqi Communist Party (1960), Daud as-Sayegh, Ittihad ash-Sha'ab, Associations Law
- ... that under 1960 Iraqi Associations Law, Daud as-Sayegh's tiny faction (which published al-Mabda') was accorded recognition as the 'Iraqi Communist Party', whilst the main communist group (which published Ittihad ash-Sha'ab) was denied legal status? Created by Soman (talk). Self nom at 03:47, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
Lorne Kidd Smith
- ... that Canadian painter Lorne Kidd Smith designed a poster for Canada's Victory Loan campaign and worked in the art department at General Motors? Created by Nikkimaria (talk). Self nom at 04:07, 31 August 2010 (UTC)
Mei Yamaguchi
- ... that the nickname of Japanese mixed martial arts fighter Mei Yamaguchi comes from the V1 armlock wrestling move? Created by Jfgslo (talk). Nominated by Secret Saturdays (talk) at 03:22, 31 August 2010 (UTC)
Promise Neighborhoods
- ... that the Promise Neighborhoods program has recieved 339 applications for $10 million in federal planning grants? Created by SteveChervitzTrutane (talk). Nominated by Secret Saturdays (talk) at 03:22, 31 August 2010 (UTC)
Mimi Lo
- ... that cantopop singer Mimi Lo stated that her husband Power Chan only knew her as an actress when they first met? Created by Music + Pageants (talk). Nominated by Secret Saturdays (talk) at 03:22, 31 August 2010 (UTC)
Le Castle Vania
- ... that at one point, Le Castle Vania's remix of Black Eyes by Snowden was the most requested song at a New Zealand radio station? Created by Kindzmarauli (talk). Self nom at 01:06, 31 August 2010 (UTC)
Hamilton Hill, Schenectady, New York
- ... that the first Black church in Schenectady, New York was begun by a White college student and located in the Hamilton Hill neighborhood in 1870? Created by Camelbinky (talk). Self nom at 19:10, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
Alexander Pendarves
- ... that MP Alexander Pendarves was listed as a member of the October Club? Created by Rosiestep (talk). Self nom at 05:47, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
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- Member of which Parliament? Or mention he was a Cornish MP or something. Le Deluge (talk) 18:54, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
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- ALT1 ... that Cornish MP Alexander Pendarves was listed as a member of the October Club? --Rosiestep (talk) 20:20, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
Megaliths in Mecklenburg-Vorpommern
- ... that according to folklore, dwarves guard treasures hidden in Mecklenburg-Vorpommern's megalith tombs (example pictured)? Created by Skäpperöd (talk). Nominated by Skäpperöd (talk) at 05:37, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
Tom Beckman
- ... that Michigan linebacker Tom Beckman worked more than 30 years for General Motors where he was in charge of new vehicle launches? Created by Cbl62 (talk). Self nom at 02:33, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
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- The 30 years isn't that interesting (and long service is implied by a relatively senior job), it would be nice if it was something along the lines of "was in charge of new vehicle launches at General Motors when XXX model was launched"? Helps bring it home to people if they can link him to something they see on their streets every day. Le Deluge (talk) 10:15, 31 August 2010 (UTC)
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- Unfortunately, the source does not identify a specific model or list of models. If the 30 year part is a concern, we could go with the following alt hook:
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- alt 1 ... that Michigan linebacker Tom Beckman later worked as an executive for General Motors where he was in charge of new vehicle launches?
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- 30 years isn't a concern, just a bit dull. Even if the specific source doesn't say what models he was responsible for, it would not be WP:OR to say that on the one hand he was in charge of new models between 1999 and 2004 (or whenever), and a separate source to say that GM released model X in 2001 and model Y in 2002. A hook could reasonably say that models X and Y were released whilst he was in charge of new models. OTOH, it would be WP:OR to say that he was in charge of releasing models X & Y. Like I say, I just thought it might make it a bit more tangible if you can relate him to something people are familiar with. Le Deluge (talk) 01:38, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
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- I appreciate the effort to come up with an improved hook. However, the source that says Beckman was in charge of new vehicle launches here does not identify specific models, nor does it specify the range of years when he held the position. Accordingly, there is no reliable hook to tie the hook to specific models. I think the original hook is pretty good. It's unusual for a football player to reach such a level with one of the world's largest (until a few years ago THE largest) corporations. Cbl62 (talk) 14:48, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
Valerie Bettis
- ... that Valerie Bettis was the first modern dance choreographer to work with a major ballet company? 5x expanded by Cryptic C62 (talk). Self nom at 02:12, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
Andy Anderson (baseball)
- ... that as a member of the United States Army during World War II, professional baseball player Andy Anderson was taken captive by German soldiers and was later rescued from a Stalag? Created by Halvorsen brian (talk). Self nom at 01:16, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
George Roubicek
- ... that actor George Roubicek had small roles in The Dirty Dozen, Doctor Who and the first Star Wars film before becoming a dialogue director who dubs foreign films into English? Created by Hunter Kahn (talk). Nominated by Hunter Kahn (talk) at 01:05, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
827th Tank Destroyer Battalion
- ... that the 827th Tank Destroyer Battalion of the US Army was withdrawn from combat after less than a month's service, after reports that officers had threatened to shoot their own men?
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- ALT1:... that when first ordered into combat in 1945, the 827th Tank Destroyer Battalion of the US Army had three men shot in brawls before it even left camp?
- Comment: I personally prefer the second, but I'm not sure how best to phrase it to make it clear they shot each other, rather than encountering opposition surprisingly early...
Created by Shimgray (talk). Nominated by Shimgray (talk) at 00:33, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
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I've tweaked the first hook slightly. Age, length, and hook verified. --Cryptic C62 · Talk 15:31, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
Freedom of the press in Ukraine
- ... that press freedom in Ukraine has never been rated higher than "partly free" by Freedom House? Created by User:Mariah-Yulia (talk). Self nom at 23:59, 29 August 2010 (UTC)
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Length and date verified, but proposed hook is not supported by the reference. The reference states that Ukraine received a "partly free" rating in 2007, but does not mention its previous ratings. I think the other fact mentioned in the reference is more interesting:
- "... that Ukraine is considered to have the greatest freedom of the press of all the former Soviet Union states?"
- --Cryptic C62 · Talk 16:27, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
- Well the section Rankings (in the article) gives refs for the claim (just click on the maps of Freedom House given in the ref). But your alternative line is more interesting
. Fine with me which one of the two get elected to be DYK!
— Mariah-Yulia • Talk to me! 23:21, 2 September 2010 (UTC)- I think the alt hook is more interesting.—Chris!c/t 01:48, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
- Ah, I hadn't noticed the more detailed discussion of the ratings in the body of the article. I just hit Control+F and titleed for "never" and only found the one result in the lead. Nevertheless, it appears that there is consensus that the alternative hook is more interesting, so I consider this
good to go! --Cryptic C62 · Talk 02:58, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
- Ah, I hadn't noticed the more detailed discussion of the ratings in the body of the article. I just hit Control+F and titleed for "never" and only found the one result in the lead. Nevertheless, it appears that there is consensus that the alternative hook is more interesting, so I consider this
- I think the alt hook is more interesting.—Chris!c/t 01:48, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
- Well the section Rankings (in the article) gives refs for the claim (just click on the maps of Freedom House given in the ref). But your alternative line is more interesting
J.D. Short
- ... that the American Delta blues singer, J.D. Short, had both of his testicles shot off? Created by Derek R Bullamore (talk). Self nom at 23:57, 29 August 2010 (UTC)
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Length and date verified, offline ref accepted in good faith. --Cryptic C62 · Talk 01:32, 31 August 2010 (UTC)
- ..or indeed ALT1: ... that the American singer, J.D. Short, sang the blues after he had both of his testicles shot off? Ghmyrtle (talk) 21:48, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
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- Either hook is absolutely fine with me. Mucho ouch or tee hee to both versions, depending upon your mood. Incidentally, if the offline reference mentioned is Henry Townsend's autobiography, A Blues Life, then extracts are available at Google books ([9]) - if this helps. Thank you.
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Tō
- ... that Japanese pagodas, with very rare exceptions, have an odd number of tiers? Created by Urashimataro (talk). Nominated by Urashimataro (talk) at 23:47, 29 August 2010 (UTC)
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- No, I really meant odd. Tō, with the exception of the tahōtō, have 1, 3, 5, 7, 9, 11 or 13 tiers. You must have misread the article Tō at JAANUS. Quote from JAANUS' article Sekitou:
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- Like timber pagodas, tou 塔, stone pagodas always have an odd number of stories.
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- Or else see the photos and count. The tahōtō is the single exception.Frank (Urashima Tarō) (talk) 14:02, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
Gene Alderton
- ... that University of Maryland football co-captain Gene Alderton lost a tooth the week before he was scheduled to meet Queen Elizabeth II in a pre-game ceremony against North Carolina? Created by Strikehold (talk). Nominated by Strikehold (talk) at 23:06, 29 August 2010 (UTC)
Gil Chapman
- ... that Gil Chapman was Michigan's career leader in kickoff return yards and the first African-American elected to office in Elizabeth, New Jersey? Created by Cbl62 (talk). Self nom at 23:05, 29 August 2010 (UTC)
LeFleur's Bluff State Park
- ... that LeFleur's Bluff State Park is named for a French Canadian trader who established a trading post in what is now Jackson, Mississippi? 5x expanded by Dincher (talk). Self nom at 22:36, 29 August 2010 (UTC)
Legislative Assembly of Jammu and Kashmir
- ... that 24 seats in the Legislative Assembly of Jammu and Kashmir are for constituencies currently lying in Pakistan-administered Kashmir and thus are officially vacant? Created by S h i va (Visnu) (talk). Nominated by S h i v a (Visnu) (talk) at 21:34, 29 August 2010 (UTC)
Black Betsy
- ... that Shoeless Joe Jackson's Black Betsy broke the record for the most expensive baseball bat in history, selling for $577,610 in 2001? Created by Secret (talk). Self nom at 21:29, 29 August 2010 (UTC)